Your revisions really showed. You clearly know your stuff and could talk easily about it. Further, your visual presentation was excellent. I think you all choice the most interesting topic, but perhaps the most difficult to "sell" as relevant to your audience. For that reason, if you revise this assignment for the portfolio, you might want to spend some time stressing the "why you should care" point. Aside from "people should care about other people," why would American college students be effected by a fledgingly HIV pilot program in Africa? In a related point, you might also want to linger on your conclusions a bit longer. How is the stigma of HIV infection different/the same there?
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Your revisions really showed. You clearly know your stuff and could talk easily about it. Further, your visual presentation was excellent. I think you all choice the most interesting topic, but perhaps the most difficult to "sell" as relevant to your audience. For that reason, if you revise this assignment for the portfolio, you might want to spend some time stressing the "why you should care" point. Aside from "people should care about other people," why would American college students be effected by a fledgingly HIV pilot program in Africa? In a related point, you might also want to linger on your conclusions a bit longer. How is the stigma of HIV infection different/the same there?
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